Welcome to the Saturday Mix – Lucky Dip, 5 November 2022!
For this week’s Lucky Dip, I have reached into my mystery bag and pulled out a Triquint. The topic is up to you!
You may be thinking to yourself, What on earth is Triquint?
Luckily, Shadow Poetry has an explanation…
Triquint
Triquint, a poem for created by Sylvia A. Feeley, which consists of 3 verses, 5 lines each. Lines 3 and 4 of verse 1 (Refrain) repeat in verses 2 and 3. The syllable count for each stanza is 9, 7, 5, 3, 1 and has an aaAAb rhyme scheme.
Example
Words written in verses, they appeal.
Sung about in songs you feel.
Heartache, all to real.
Ne’er ideal.
Hears.Emotions which are hard to conceal.
Feelings that are so surreal.
Heartache, all to real.
Ne’er ideal.
Tears.Beliefs that if you were to reveal,
would cause pain too hard to heal.
Heartache, all to real.
Ne’er ideal.
Fears.Copyright © 2008 Sylvia A. Feeley
Good luck with your ‘Lucky Dip Triquint’ – I can’t wait to see what you come up with! Don’t forget to tag ‘Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie’, ‘Saturday Mix’, and hashtag #LuckyDip.
As always, make sure you link your fabulous creation to the helpful Mister Linky.
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Thanks for hosting 🙂 This was surprisingly challenging! Here’s mine: https://cognacproject.wordpress.com/2022/11/05/lucky-dip-triquint/
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Indeed a unique challenge but I came up with: Oh, Deer? Oh, Dear!
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I thought I had it and then realized my ‘b’ in the aaAAb had two syllables – what a challenge. Triquint = tricky!
All fixed now: https://betweenthedots.ca/2022/11/05/where-are-all-the-humans/
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I am trying this now but am rather embarrassed by my attempt. 😅 It’s hard to have so many of the same rhyme and make it make sense.
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Enjoyed writing a Triquint Poetry. That was a learning curve indeed! Thanks for sharing.
Here is my attempt: https://www.auraofthoughts.com/2022/11/Self-introspection-need-of-hour-triquint-poetry.html
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