Well, it’s the twentieth day of the month of May and it is also my birthday; the latter being an inconsequential fact. I do not like birthdays anymore. Just like that. It is not that I am of an age when I begin to worry about ageing and start looking into the mirror everyday to count my wrinkles. It is just an age when an year added or subtracted doesn’t really matter anymore.
When we are kids, we eagerly wait for our birthdays. And for some, birthdays are a special occasion after growing up as well. It is after all your day, when you can have a party, cut a cake, invite your friends to your place or go some place good, spend quality time with your family, etc.
But what are we actually celebrating; the day that we were born or yet another year that has gone? I wonder.
But since it’s my birthday, I would like to gift you a prompt. Do whatsoever you want to do with it. Meaning to say, you can pen down anything of your choice based on any theme you want, given that it is a haiku or tanka or both and make a post and share it with us.
And how about playing a game? Games are an intrinsic part of parties, right? Let’s have a sort of renga session. We will do it the easy way. I would begin with a haiku, and the first person to comment would write one, beginning with the last line of my haiku and adding two lines to it. The next person would take the last line of the previously penned haiku, add two lines to it and post it. And so on and so forth. This way, we’d have some fun in the comments section this week. Maybe, that is the gift that I want from you all.
So, here I begin:
her small hands
touching the temple bell-
an imprint of innocence
Not a very good one. But my haiku skills have become rusty. And I am publishing haiku writing prompts. How delightful. 😀
What to do next?
1. Publish a post with your haiku or tanka if you have a blog. If you haven’t got a blog, you can share them in the comments down below. In case you have published a post, you can submit its link in the linking widget.
2. After you have made the post, take some of your time and visit the links of other participants. This is how we learn and improvise. Return again at the end of the week if you have made your post during the weekdays because there would be new links to visit, which would help us all to make connections and develop the feeling of community and togetherness in our adventure every week. Even if you can’t take out the time to visit all the links, then visit at least the link shared before or after you and offer your feedback and develop comradeship with that person.
You can also add the following tags to your post: HeedingHaikuWithHA andMindLoveMisery’sMenagerie.
A happy happy happy birthday to you, anmol! 🙂
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Thank you. 🙂
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Happy Birthday HA
her small hands
touching the temple bell
an imprint of innocence
an imprint of innocence
beautifully trimmings gift wrapped
what lies underneath
behind the sweet face
of a buddha lies the heart
of a scorpion
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oops …beautiful trimmings gift wrapped
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Thanks, Cressida.
I love that “heart/of a scorpion”. 🙂
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Happy Birthday HA!!!
of a scorpion
amazing energy shines
cheers on your birthday
cheers on your birthday
celebrate it with style
with loved ones around
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I did spend the day with my family. It was good.
Thanks for contributing to this sort of renga session. 🙂
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Many happy returns, HA
With loved ones around
solitude is banished.
She longs for quiet.
Silence palls
the loved ones are missed –
she longs for company
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The contrast is beautiful. How when our loved ones are around, we long for some alone time and when they are not there, we long for their company.
Heart breaking.
Thanks for contributing to this sort of renga session. 🙂
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she longs for company
pink carnations in a vase
love through mail
We share the same birth day. ^^ Wishing you a happy birthday and a lovely new year for you.
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Happy Birthday to you too. I am sorry for being late in wishing you. Have a great year ahead. 🙂
Thanks for sharing your lovely haiku with us. Those carnations must make her feel better, for someone remembered her. Or at least I hope so.
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She longs for company
summer breeze sustains
finds connection within
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Those connections within made me smile. Beautifully penned.
Thanks for contributing to this renga session. 🙂
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finds connection within
Ha our birthday boy does
he writes great haiku
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That is really sweet of you.
Thanks for contributing to this renga session. 🙂
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he writes great haiku –
provides prompts for me and you
let us share this gift
let us share this gift
of words well worth amending
the tone and spirit
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Thank you, Jules, for your ever wonderful words. 🙂
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[…] https://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2015/05/20/heeding-haiku-with-ha-a-gift/ And how about playing a game? Games are an intrinsic part of parties, right? Let’s have a sort of renga session. We will do it the easy way. I would begin with a haiku, and the first person to comment would write one, beginning with the last line of my haiku and adding two lines to it. The next person would take the last line of the previously penned haiku, add two lines to it and post it. And so on and so forth. This way, we’d have some fun in the comments section this week. Maybe, that is the gift that I want from you all. Please see the comments section of this MLMM Post for the names of all the contributors to this ongoing piece…eventually I hope to add all that contribute. […]
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So far…
https://juleslongerstrandsofgems.wordpress.com/2015/05/20/the-birthday-gift-unwrapped/
Happy Birthday!
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Thank you, Jules. And I loved the collection of all the haiku that you posted and shared. Simply wonderful. 🙂
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When I am able I will add any additional ones – Best to you. We may age, but let us be young and full of imagination and wonder in our hearts.
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finds connection within
the song of birds that
fill the air with joyfulness
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No problem – I put them both in 🙂
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Joyfulness indeed. A beautiful haiku. 🙂
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Thanks
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Oops. I used the wrong last line. I’ll try again
The tone and spirit
lifts us to a higher plain
singing joy to our souls
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It’s completely alright.
And thank you for contributing to this sort of renga session. 🙂
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sing joy to our souls
oh, restless tumbling breeze
make these candles dance
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WOW, I love these lines–they’d make a great blog header. You’ve added joy to my soul this evening.
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Thank you. I’m glad.
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Beautiful.
Thanks for contributing to this renga session. 🙂
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Happy Birthday HA–have a fun day! I’ll try to come back later–
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Thanks. 🙂
Have a good day.
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make these candles dance
draw on deep-filled silence –
gift yourself away
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I LOVE “gift” as verb, Eleni. 🙂
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🙂
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That is very well-penned. I too loved the use of “gift” as verb here. 🙂
Thanks for contributing to this renga session.
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Happy Birthday!!!
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Every one who posted in the comments – is now in my link.
What a unique gift for our host.
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Happy Birthday HA!
each new candle
celebrates your own new year
a gift of life
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A beautiful haiku, Georgia. 🙂
Thanks for playing along in this sort of renga session.
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My pleasure .. I still remember when we did our first renga a couple of years ago… 🙂
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Hi, new here via Margo Roby’s blog, but May 20 is my birthday as well, so there must be something special going on! Happy Birthday to all.
a gift of life
our atoms pulse together
in spring-kissed breeze
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And a belated Happy Birthday to you to Barb.
Everyone is in my ‘all-together’ link now 🙂
I was away and had limited time on the net. Now to catch up…
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That is a lovely haiku. Thanks for being a part of this renga session. A belated happy birthday to you. 🙂
-HA
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in spring-kissed breeze
air ripe with fragrant haiku
celebrate again
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Happy Birthday!
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A link with everything written so far https://adaspoetryalcove2.wordpress.com/2015/05/26/a-gift-renga-party/
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