Hello Folks!
I was looking for a new form to introduce, and wrote a very complicated feature about the Canzone … a form loved by Dante, but then I was writing a poem for another blog and I chose to use a troiku. So I put the Canzone aside for now for when I’ve more time to dedicate to it and decided to introduce the troiku.
What is a troiku … it’s an invented haiku variation created by Kristjaan Panneman, better known to you as Chèvrefeuille of Carpe Diem Haiku Kai and our author for Heeding Haiku with Ha! He invented the troiku back in November of 2012 (click the link troiku above for his introduction).
Here’s how it works …
you write a haiku … for example:
the persimmons fall
even the last fruit is ripe
now the snow may fall
© G.s.k. ‘15
now I break it up into its parts … and write a haiku from each line:
the persimmons fall
for the pleasure of the ants
in October
even the last fruit is ripe
pull out the winter duvet
rake up the leaves
now the snow may fall
all the fruits now harvested
the swallows long gone
© G.s.k. ‘15
I think this is a really fun form don’t you?
Now for our inspiration:
You may write a shadorma in the place of a troiku – or if your really inventive a combination of shadorma and troiku. The shadorma is a non-rhyming 6-line poem with a syllable count of 3/5/3/3/7/5. You many also choose whatever inspires you either from this post or use your own original work.
When you have written your post, tag it: MindLoveMisery’s Menagerie and B&Ps Shadorma and Beyond. And don’t forget to add your link to Mister Linky.
As some of you might know, I’m off traipsing in the Middle Ages this week-end, so I won’t be able to read your work until next Tuesday or so … Paloma will try to comment on your work before that, but remember, she doesn’t get notifications when I write the post … so be patient for a bit … and be sure your work will be read!
Ciao, Bastet
Definitely an interesting challenge–we’re not restricted as to topic, right? Doesn’t have to be autumn or autumn leaves?
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And by the way, your troiku is marvelous!
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Never restricted to topic on B&P … everything is grist for our mill!
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Good to know–thanks very much, Bastet.
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No problem.
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[…] After I wrote this, I realized it wasn’t true to Chèvrefeuille’s Troiku form. He uses each line of the base haiku as the first line of the subsequent three. I have retained the lines in their original position to stay close to the 5-7-5 syllable count. Posting this one anyway, will try again to write a true Troiku. Linking to Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie. […]
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Thanks for the prompt B&P.. Here’s my shot at it.. it ended up as a variation, didn’t read the rules too well I think, probably should try a real troiku later! But for now: https://thotpurge.wordpress.com/2015/08/22/in-the-morning-light/
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Thanks for participating … I’m sure your eventual troiku will be really great. 🙂 Bastet
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Stunning Troiku Georgia ,which is very much enhanced by that beautiful song. Did you know that ” Autumn Leaves” is originally French?Have fun tripping through the Middle Ages. Go easy on the mead (chuckles)and watch out for the jousting sticks !
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Oh thanks so much Rall … and yest, I knew it was originally in French … though my Mom loved the English version and played it quite a lot when I was little. Had a great time in the middle ages … and didn’t touch the mead, though I did try the cherry beer 😉 … and kept well away from the jousters … those people are crazy!
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[…] For: B&P’s Shadorma & Beyond […]
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[…] https://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2015/08/22/bp-shadorma-and-beyond-the-troiku-august-2… Please see the prompt for instructions. The shadorma is a non-rhyming 6-line poem with a syllable count of 3/5/3/3/7/5. […]
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https://juleslongerstrandsofgems.wordpress.com/2015/08/22/accented-toe-may-toe-or-ta-ma-toe-mlmm-prompt-8-22-s/
Once Kristjaan encouraged us to go another ‘layer’ …
you might also enjoy:
http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com/2014/02/cd-special-winter-troiku.html
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Thanks Jules … a great couple of links 🙂
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https://wealthofruins.wordpress.com/2015/08/22/spiraled-season/
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[…] saw this really interesting prompt by Mind Love Misery’s Menagerie for a Troiku. As explained on the page, a Troiku is a poem that is derived by expanding each line of a haiku […]
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Thanks for the prompt! Loved this inventive form 🙂
https://twopaisepoems.wordpress.com/2015/08/23/lose-control-shadorma-troiku/
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[…] I got inspiration for this form from Bastet at Mind Love Misery’s Menagerie. […]
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I enjoyed that. https://miskmask.wordpress.com/2015/08/24/a-troiku-poem/
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Very nicely done. I like the Troiku formate. https://adaspoetryalcove.wordpress.com/2015/08/25/1432/
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And you use it exceptionally well … brava!
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Yay!! a Troiku…happy I was to see this and then I listen to the song…beautiful but oh for the memories.
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I’m so glad you found it … you are definitely the Empress of the troiku – and that song is so lovely and always full of memories!
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Ah but it brought back memories of my mom listening to this and Connie Frances records when my father told her he no longer loved her…oh what a painful time for her.
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Ah … those are very sad memories indeed … I’m so sorry.
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[…] Troiku is a form created by Chevrefeuille who hosts CarpeDiemHaikuKai. This is a variation on his form. The original prompt was hosted at Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie. […]
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[…] Written in the form of Troiku, inspired by this post at Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie. […]
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Awesome to see my ‘invention’ here at mlmm. I have linked one troiku from my archive.
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🙂 it is a great pleasure introducing the troiku to our little community … a great invention!
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[…] by Thotpurges’s variation of the troiku (which you can see clicking on this LINK 🙂 In the Morning […]
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