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Welcome to B&P’s Shadorma and Beyond!
For this week I am continuing to review forms we’ve used in the past. Let’s look again at the Joseph’s Star. The Joseph’s Star was created by Christina R. Jussaume. It is a non-rhyming 8-line poem with a syllable count of 1/3/5/7/7/5/3/1. Each stanza is center-aligned so that the finished poem is diamond-shaped.
You may join as many stanzas as you wish.
Here is an example of a one-stanza Joseph’s Star:
which
of these roads
will lead to your heart –
and which has the highest cost?
if you’re creeping in the mud
you haven’t arrived –
keep moving –
live!
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Or – since this is “Shadorma and Beyond” – you may write a shadorma – or a combination of shadormas and Joseph’s Stars. Again, the shadorma is a non-rhyming 6-line poem with a syllable count of 3/5/3/3/7/5.
You may use the Beatles song, the Jacek Yerka painting, or whatever inspires you!
When you have written your Joseph’s Star, tag it: MindLoveMisery’s Menagerie and B&Ps Shadorma and Beyond. And don’t forget to add your link to Mister Linky.
Have Fun!
Jen
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Love that photo 🙂
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He’s a great artist, isn’t he? 🙂
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Never heard of him before, but if this one is any indication then I would say a resounding YES!!
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Oh WOW, I just googled him…he is FANTASTIC!!!
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He sure is!!! When I saw him on WikiArt the first time I was blown away… Very glad you enjoy the work too 🙂
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Wow .. what a cool challenge and I agree with C.C. a great photo
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Thanks — I think this form still has a lot of potential with the diamond format — and this artist is another favorite. Very recent too. 🙂
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I’ like to give it a try asap .. hope I’ve got the time … had problems with the computer this morning … a anti-virus update that was HEAVY!
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Oh wow …. antivirus update? Yeesh. That might explain some things around here too 😛
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Don’t know about that .. unless we have the same antivirus … the internet has been sketchy every day it’s been really hot .. think it overheats my CPU …
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Very good prompt Jen . Enjoyed writing this.Your prompt poem was excellent and inspirational too. Looking forward to reading the others.
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Thanks Rall — I’m so glad you enjoyed the prompt! Looking forward to your poem 🙂
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Hi Jen! This will be interesting to try–and I LOVE the painting, fantastic!
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Can hardly wait!
Glad you liked the painting too. A lot of his work on WikiArt — quite interesting!
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I got 2 stanzas so I’m excited–but I didn’t end up using the WikiArt image…now, go to sleep!!
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Yes — g’night! 😀
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🙂
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A stunning painting which suits an event that impacted my life over the past week.
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I’m so glad the painting was meaningful to you —
Looking forward to your response 🙂
All the best —
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This was a fun one. I hadn’t done the Joseph’s Star form before. Hope you enjoy it. I added it to the link up this time. Sometimes, I am unable to do that due to time. Lol
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Hello AC — glad you enjoyed the form! 🙂
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Hello … I’ve written my Joseph Star but it won’t come up until the 23rd of August … and of course it’s about wanderlust 😉
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I’ll be looking forward to it! 🙂
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Finally got here. But I’ll post it tomorrow….
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Sounds good 🙂
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T’is in the linky also:
https://juleslongerstrandsofgems.wordpress.com/2015/08/20/library-loft-combined-short-forms-8-20-s/
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