Surprises are a part of life whether you love them or hate them. Some surprises are planned by well-meaning loved ones. We offer gifts wrapped. We jump out at one another from behind furniture in unlit rooms after days of cryptic talk and avoidance. We hide engagement rings and stage elaborate and theatrical events all to make a moment unforgettable. Sometimes we play pranks on each other some mean-spirited, some funny, some juvenile pleas for affection. Even prearranged surprises can go awry for better or worse.
Sometimes people surprise us by changing or expressing a view we’d not anticipated. Sometimes life surprises us. Some of these surprises are positive winning the lottery, getting pregnant after years of unsuccessful attempts, the remission of a long-standing seemingly indomitable disease. Some of these surprises are unwanted an unexpected illness, a loss of employment, car problems.
Surprises teach us a lot about ourselves because they force us to wake up, stand up, grow up, let go. They invoke emotional responses laughter, tears of joy, tears of remorse, shrieks of terror, shrieks of delight. Surprises penetrate our armor. As writers we take advantage of surprise tactics to get a reaction from our readers plot twists, strongly worded/antagonistic declarations, grotesque metaphors and so on.
For this week’s prompt you can either attempt to “shock” your readers or you can write about the theme itself. Surprises are on my mind lately because Isadora just had a birthday and mine is one the way.
Sorry for the delay my computer was not cooperating this morning
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This is a true story – thankfully not mine:}
http://georgeplaceblog.wordpress.com/2014/11/02/the-birth-of-a-surprise/
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Aah, yet another novemberite! my list keeps getting longer!
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Nov 8 what about you?
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Nov 6
Friend today
Hubby Nov 5
Landlord Nov 7
Friend Nov 12
Grandfathers: Nov. 4 and 6
and so it goes!
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I have some relatives in November as well XD
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Your prompt helped to move Sonja along…
https://julesinflashyfiction.wordpress.com/2014/11/02/11-2-ah-ha-and-expanding-brilliance/
Happy Birthday November Folks!!!
I have a niece on Nov. 3rd.
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Thanks Jules XD
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[…] I’m a little late for Halloween, but figured this was a good response to the prompt over at MindLoveMisery’s Menagerie, where she asked us to give a surprise ending. I was also inspired by the wordle over at The Sunday […]
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I had so much fun trying to make this a surprise 😀 http://historyofawoman.com/2014/11/03/procure-break-up/
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I loved your entry!
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[…] prompt over at mindlovemisery’s menagerie was “Surprise”. Just last weekend, we had surprise showers in the peak of October Heat! […]
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So yay! I am November as well 😀 Nov 22. My dad is Nov4 (today!) and sister Nov 1! Love this month
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Me too =) I have cousins, a grandmother, a father in law, and of course me.
You have the same birthday as my grandmother XD
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Ah! Now this is brilliant 😀 November is the month of birthdays
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