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Heeding Haiku With Chèvrefeuille, May 16th 2018 … crossroads

Dear friends of MLMM,

This week I love to challenge you in another way. Today I love to ask you to create a new haiku, or as I call it a “fusion”-haiku. What is the goal of this week’s challenge? I will give you two haiku by a classical haiku poet, two nice ones I think, and you have to create a new haiku, a fusion, between the scenes in the given haiku. Imagine you are on a crossroad … you can take several paths to find your destination, your goal. The goal for this challenge … well I think it’s very clear.

Here are the two haiku to create your “fusion” with, two beauties by Matsuo Basho (1644-1694), translations by Jane Reichhold:

from a treetop
emptiness dropped down
in a cicada shell

black forest
whatever you may say
a morning of snow

And this is my “fusion” of these two beauties by my sensei:

silent forest
emptiness filled with snow
a cicada shell

© Chèvrefeuille

Have fun!

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About Chèvrefeuille

I am a Dutch haiku poet. And I am the owner and host of the weblog "Carpe Diem, a daily haiku meme" on Blogger (or Blogspot). I am writing haiku since the late eighties and in 2005 I became an international known haiku poet and in 2011 ten of my haiku were included in a worldwide anthology "Spasms of Light". With that anthology I became an even more known haiku poet. In October 2012 I started my daily haiku meme.

6 comments on “Heeding Haiku With Chèvrefeuille, May 16th 2018 … crossroads

  1. calmkate
    May 16, 2018

    ok don’t think I’ve quite got the haiku thing happening so would totally appreciate your feedback?

    forest trees black
    with empty cicada shells
    snow blankets the ground

  2. Suzanne
    May 16, 2018

    I like your fusion haiku. As usual I went off on the tangent and used the two haiku as inspiration rather than fusing the content of the original. It’s probably not what you had in mind. Please let me know if it’s too far from the rules of the challenge.

  3. Jules
    May 17, 2018

    I’m not sure I fused correctly either… but I went where the prompt directed me:
    action, reaction

  4. MNL
    May 18, 2018

    it was fun trying out creating a fusion haiku — always great to read Basho, especially since I hadn’t seen these two before. I loved the way your haiku caught the bleak quiet of snow with that one note of long-past summer season (i associate cicadas with summer)

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