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Heeding Haiku With Chèvrefeuille, May 10th 2017 … another try to create troiku.


Yellow Chrysanthemum


Dear friends of MLMM,

I was very surprised by all your responses on my “troiku”-challenge, so I thought to do this again here at MLMM, but now with a haiku which you have to use to create the Troiku with.

I have chosen an oldie written by myself:

fresh fallen snow
the yellow Chrysanthemums look
more yellowish

(C) Chèvrefeuille

The goal is to create a Troiku, by creating three haiku with the separated lines of the haiku above. So you have to create a haiku with “fresh fallen snow”, “the yellow Chrysanthemums look” and “more yellowish”.

Have fun!

When you have written your haiku, please TAG Heeding Haiku with Chèvrefeuille and Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie. Then add your link to the Mister Linky widget below.

About Chèvrefeuille

I am a Dutch haiku poet. And I am the owner and host of the weblog "Carpe Diem, a daily haiku meme" on Blogger (or Blogspot). I am writing haiku since the late eighties and in 2005 I became an international known haiku poet and in 2011 ten of my haiku were included in a worldwide anthology "Spasms of Light". With that anthology I became an even more known haiku poet. In October 2012 I started my daily haiku meme.

5 comments on “Heeding Haiku With Chèvrefeuille, May 10th 2017 … another try to create troiku.

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  2. flashpoetguy
    May 11, 2017

    TROIKU #2

    fresh fallen snow
    dot the flower heads
    like white patches of stars

    the yellow Chrysanthemums look
    upward assembling Heaven
    with myriad facets of their petals

    more yellowish
    than autumn leaves –
    each petal a miniature sun


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  4. flashpoetguy
    May 12, 2017

    My attempt at writing another troiku: https://tinyurl.com/lpervjm

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