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Finish off Fridays #9: The Wait 03.03.17

It’s Finish off Fridays (FoF) time again – the flash fiction writing prompt that alternates with Sanaa’s Friday Music Prompt.

I provide the picture and the opening sentence, you write an additional 100 to 150 words to complete the story.

Please include the picture and the opening sentence in your post, tag it Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie, Finish off Fridays, flash fiction. Create a link (ping-back) to this post, and don’t forget Mr. Linky awaits your click.



Clementine anxiously waited for the 5:40 out of the city, wondering if he would be on board.

photograph ©Lorraine; click on for a larger image


About Lorraine

"Not all those who wander are lost" JRR Tolkien

15 comments on “Finish off Fridays #9: The Wait 03.03.17

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    • Lorraine
      March 3, 2017

      Lovely story told from a child’s perspective. Good stories are to be told, and retold.

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  5. Raivenne
    March 4, 2017

    And he’s my finish—


    • Lorraine
      March 4, 2017

      Wonderful story and great use of the song! Thoroughly enjoyed your story.

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  9. julespaige
    March 5, 2017

    Playing with multi prompts for this fiction edition:
    (multi prompts) Reunion of Innocents?

    • Lorraine
      March 6, 2017

      Another well-woven tapestry of prompts! I enjoyed the prosetry-feel to the piece.

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