Heeding Haiku With Chèvrefeuille, November 8th 2016 75 words haibun

 

Dear friends of MLMM,

Welcome at a new Heeding Haiku With … This week I love to challenge you to create a haibun with a maximum of 75 words (including the haiku or tanka). Not an easy task, but I think you can do it.

Several years ago I tried to write a haibun with a maximum of 55 words on another website and … it wasn’t easy but I succeeded. Maybe I have shared it earlier here, but it is just to show you that it is possible.

A wondrous place. Trees and streets covered with snow. The bright sunlight. Roofs like crystal.
Love is warming our bodies in front of the fireplace. Drinking red wine, eating marshmallows. This is paradise. Our legs entwined. Lost in each others eyes. Together you and I.

making love
in front of the fireplace –
winter feeling

© Chèvrefeuille

Well …. I hope you will try it …. Have fun!

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About Chèvrefeuille

I am a Dutch haiku poet. And I am the owner and host of the weblog "Carpe Diem, a daily haiku meme" on Blogger (or Blogspot). I am writing haiku since the late eighties and in 2005 I became an international known haiku poet and in 2011 ten of my haiku were included in a worldwide anthology "Spasms of Light". With that anthology I became an even more known haiku poet. In October 2012 I started my daily haiku meme.

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