Heeding Haiku With Chèvrefeuille, November 8th 2016 75 words haibun

 

fireplace-wine

Dear friends of MLMM,

Welcome at a new Heeding Haiku With … This week I love to challenge you to create a haibun with a maximum of 75 words (including the haiku or tanka). Not an easy task, but I think you can do it.

Several years ago I tried to write a haibun with a maximum of 55 words on another website and … it wasn’t easy but I succeeded. Maybe I have shared it earlier here, but it is just to show you that it is possible.

A wondrous place. Trees and streets covered with snow. The bright sunlight. Roofs like crystal.
Love is warming our bodies in front of the fireplace. Drinking red wine, eating marshmallows. This is paradise. Our legs entwined. Lost in each others eyes. Together you and I.

making love
in front of the fireplace –
winter feeling

© Chèvrefeuille

Well …. I hope you will try it …. Have fun!

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