Hello Folks … there’s been a bit of a mix-up today but never fear we’re on hand to present you with a new poetry challenge!
Today I thought we’d look at a “Cherita”. Cherita (pronounced CHAIR-rita) is a linked poetry form of one-, two-, and three-line stanzas. Cherita is Malay for story in fact:
A cherita consists of a one-line stanza, followed by a two-line stanza, and then finishing with a three-line stanza. It can either be written solo or by up to three partners.
The Cherita tells a story. It was created by ai li (A UK poet and artist) on June 22, 1997 in memory of her grandparents who were raconteur extraordinaire. It was also inspired by Larry Kimmel’s sensitive recognition of a shorter form contained within the opening three-verse stanza of ai li’s LUNENGA, which was created May 27, 1997.
The Cherita arose out of the English-language haiku and tanka tradition, but is more anecdotal, or nano-narrative, in nature than are the “momentary” haiku and the more lyrical tanka, though it is easily adaptable to lyrical expression. It is imagistic and depends on conciseness and suggestion for its effect.
Pasted from http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cherita
And here’s a sample:
after seeing you off
taking the path along
the canal
a rustle of
leaves
underfoot
© Larry Kimmel
and
his bedtime story
the never-ending tales
of enchantment
now you see them
now you don’t
night fairies
© ai li
So, restated:
A 6 line poem in three separate stanzas, a single line, a couplet, then a tercet.
Each stanza is a complete strophe
The line lengths are at the poets’ discretion
The poem should be presented, centered and untitled.
It should be imagistic and concise.
Now, for a little inspiration!
Once you’ve written your Cherita or if you prefer one of the variations of the Shadorma either inspired by the above photo or maybe by your own art-work, please tag your post: Mindlovesmisery Menagerie and B&P Shadorma and Beyond then add your link to the Mr. Linky App below.
Have yourself a great week, Bastet.
lovely examples. I like the form 🙂
Glad you like the form .. I’m looking forward to see your poem! 🙂
I’m trying to figure out where to work it in. My poetic storyline for the moment is written in sonnets.
Then this will really be a bit of a challenge … I haven’t tried this form myself and it will be an adventure for me also .. but as I do a lot of my work in haiku form it might not be quite so great a change from what I’m used to.
You have me at a disadvantage then. I have written very little of the micro forms but I love reading what others write in those forms 🙂
Then for you it’ll be an adventure … a way to write out of the box! Bonne chance 🙂
Is that your way of throwing down the gauntlet? 😉 I think my muse just ran for cover.
LOL .. not at all – I don’t throw down gauntlets! Only remarking that the form is different what you usually write. (Sorry to scare your muse!)
Ah he’ll be back. He knows I have a lot of writing to do 🙂 aw no poetic duel? I’ll go but my rapier back in storage… 😉 I love that we can joke like this! You’re making me smile and I thank you for it. It was a tough week.
I’m terribly sorry it was a rough week .. knowing something about rough times I prefer to search out happy smiley things when I can ..
I am searching hard for those smiley things…life just keeps piling up the bad though…I hope there will be a light at the end of this tunnel and soon!
I’m sure routing for you … and sending happy chocolatey thoughts …
oooo chocolatey thoughts are best! Thank you!
You’re very welcome.
😀
Ohhh! I’m looking forward to this! Thanks, Georgia!
🙂 So glad you like it!
Thank you for filling in for me, Bastet — hoping to be back on my feet soon. Big hug —
Thank you!
Get well soon Jen…
Thanks Rall
No problem … get well soon … Big hug to you too!
Oooo…this was fun….now to find the time to do another one:) Got to go out…would much rather just write poetry…Life is getting in the way of writing ! Thanks G.
Thanks Rall – glad you like the prompt! Life does have a way of interrupting out writing doesn’t it … but on the other hand, where would we be without it 😉
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I enjoyed the brevity. A little wider parameters than haiku but still very compact.
I agree .. it is well thought out, and I’m not surprised it grew from the haiku community.
Here’s a lovely Cherita written by a blogging friend:
https://hooklineandinkwell.wordpress.com/2016/01/31/love-waiting-a-cherita
Thanks very much!
You’re welcome. 🙂
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Finally…
Kiddlets & ‘Daddy’ stayed for dinner…
Cherita and Shadorma
🙂 Great!
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