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B&P Shadorma & Beyond – September 19, 2015

Hello Everyone!

It’s nearly October and that means OctPoWriMo 2015 time … I don’t know how many of you participate in this autumn event … I very much enjoy it myself and will try to write a new poem (not haiku) a day and link up with the blog.  In the meantime, I receive a post a day from OctPoWriMo 2015 manned by various Creatrix and Contributors.

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Today let’s look at a classical form of prosody – the Kyrielle Poem not to be confused with the Kyrielle Sonnet which I introduced back in November 2014 

What’s the difference between the two – well let’s look at the Kyrielle Poem:

A Kyrielle poem is made up of 4 stanzas with four lines each line having eight syllables (in metrics that is in tetrameter and people tend to write them in iamb feet* for those who are interested here’s the Link to our glossary). The capital being the refrain (which is born from the fourth line of the first stanza) – you’ll notice here that unlike the sonnet there is no fifth conclusive  2 line stanza created by the first and last line of the first stanza:

aabB
ccbB
ddbB
eebB

Here’s an example of how it’s done … a poem written by John Payne (the poet not the actor)

 

A Little Pain

A little pain, a little pleasure.
A little heaping up of treasure,
Then no more gazing upon the sun.
All things must end that have begun.

Where is the time for hope or doubt?
A puff of the wind and life is out:
A turn of the wheel and the rest is won.
All things must end that have begun.

Golden mornings and purple night,
Life that fails with the failing light:
Death is the only deathless one.
All things must end that have begun.

John Payne

And here’s our inspiration for either a Kyrielle Poem or as an alternative a Shadorma:

Ferry Boat Passengers

Of course, you may find that you have a photo or piece of music that inspires you, so please don’t hesitate to use them … once you’ve written your post, please tag: Mindlovesmisery’s Menagerie and B&P Shadorma & Beyond then link to the Mr. Linky App below (if you have problems you can put your link in the comments, we’ll find you!)

Have a great week!  Bastet

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About Bastet

I love to read...I like to write...I've travelled the world and seen the sites. I'm past my prime and feel so young, especially when near the young. I'm writing this blog, to remember, to think and to share...with the hopes that someone else will make a comment that will stimulate new thoughts and pathways. Actually, I'm a gabber, so the logical extension of gabbing is blogging! ;-)

21 comments on “B&P Shadorma & Beyond – September 19, 2015

  1. Pingback: Dancing by the Moonlight – B&P Shadorma & Beyond – Kyrielle Poem | ladyleemanilasphotos

  2. Paloma
    September 20, 2015

    Both the photo and the form are quite interesting! 😀
    And good luck with OctPoWriMo! 🙂

    • Bastet
      September 20, 2015

      I’ll need it … thanks a lot Paloma! 🙂

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  4. J Lapis
    September 20, 2015

    I didn’t know there was an OctPoWriMo! Hmmm…..maybe 🙂

    • Bastet
      September 21, 2015

      Yep .. There’s an event in Spring as well as Autumn … 🙂

      • J Lapis
        September 21, 2015

        The spring one–is that in addition to NaPoWriMo?

      • Bastet
        September 21, 2015

        NaPoWriMo … is the name of the event in Spring … and it’s linked to a National project I think … I usually write for that one too 😉

      • J Lapis
        September 21, 2015

        I missed NaPoWriMo this year–first time in 4 years.

      • Bastet
        September 21, 2015

        I hope you’ll try to the October event then!

      • J Lapis
        September 22, 2015

        Maybe 🙂

      • Bastet
        September 22, 2015

        Fingers crossed! 🙂

      • Bastet
        September 22, 2015

        Finger crossed! 🙂

  5. Rall
    September 21, 2015

    Two shadormas this week…..and maybe a kyrielle for later… time permitting. Thanks for the prompt.

    • Bastet
      September 21, 2015

      Very welcome and thanks so much for participating!

  6. I combined this with the recent Winter prompt.

    • Bastet
      September 21, 2015

      Cool … hope to get by and read it asap! I’m off taking advantage of these last warm days … 🙂

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  9. Pingback: spread (multi prompts 9.24 s) | Jules Longer Strands of Gems

  10. julespaige
    September 24, 2015

    Too complex for my brain right now – but I copied the form.

    Here’s a multi prompted shadorma/haibun
    https://juleslongerstrandsofgems.wordpress.com/2015/09/24/spread-multi-prompts-9-24-s/

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