Hello Everyone!
It’s nearly October and that means OctPoWriMo 2015 time … I don’t know how many of you participate in this autumn event … I very much enjoy it myself and will try to write a new poem (not haiku) a day and link up with the blog. In the meantime, I receive a post a day from OctPoWriMo 2015 manned by various Creatrix and Contributors.
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Today let’s look at a classical form of prosody – the Kyrielle Poem not to be confused with the Kyrielle Sonnet which I introduced back in November 2014
What’s the difference between the two – well let’s look at the Kyrielle Poem:
A Kyrielle poem is made up of 4 stanzas with four lines each line having eight syllables (in metrics that is in tetrameter and people tend to write them in iamb feet* for those who are interested here’s the Link to our glossary). The capital being the refrain (which is born from the fourth line of the first stanza) – you’ll notice here that unlike the sonnet there is no fifth conclusive 2 line stanza created by the first and last line of the first stanza:
aabB
ccbB
ddbB
eebB
Here’s an example of how it’s done … a poem written by John Payne (the poet not the actor)
A Little Pain
A little pain, a little pleasure.
A little heaping up of treasure,
Then no more gazing upon the sun.
All things must end that have begun.
Where is the time for hope or doubt?
A puff of the wind and life is out:
A turn of the wheel and the rest is won.
All things must end that have begun.
Golden mornings and purple night,
Life that fails with the failing light:
Death is the only deathless one.
All things must end that have begun.
John Payne
And here’s our inspiration for either a Kyrielle Poem or as an alternative a Shadorma:
Of course, you may find that you have a photo or piece of music that inspires you, so please don’t hesitate to use them … once you’ve written your post, please tag: Mindlovesmisery’s Menagerie and B&P Shadorma & Beyond then link to the Mr. Linky App below (if you have problems you can put your link in the comments, we’ll find you!)
Have a great week! Bastet
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Both the photo and the form are quite interesting! 😀
And good luck with OctPoWriMo! 🙂
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I’ll need it … thanks a lot Paloma! 🙂
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I didn’t know there was an OctPoWriMo! Hmmm…..maybe 🙂
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Yep .. There’s an event in Spring as well as Autumn … 🙂
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The spring one–is that in addition to NaPoWriMo?
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NaPoWriMo … is the name of the event in Spring … and it’s linked to a National project I think … I usually write for that one too 😉
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I missed NaPoWriMo this year–first time in 4 years.
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I hope you’ll try to the October event then!
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Maybe 🙂
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Fingers crossed! 🙂
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Finger crossed! 🙂
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Two shadormas this week…..and maybe a kyrielle for later… time permitting. Thanks for the prompt.
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Very welcome and thanks so much for participating!
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I combined this with the recent Winter prompt.
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Cool … hope to get by and read it asap! I’m off taking advantage of these last warm days … 🙂
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Too complex for my brain right now – but I copied the form.
Here’s a multi prompted shadorma/haibun
https://juleslongerstrandsofgems.wordpress.com/2015/09/24/spread-multi-prompts-9-24-s/
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