Hello everyone! This is Jen again, greeting you from BJ’s Shadorma & Beyond. Thank you for participating in last week’s challenge! I hope you enjoyed Bastet’s Fibonacci!
For this week you have the choice of writing a shadorma (a non-rhyming six-line poem in 3/5/3/3/7/5), or a “poetweet“.
Poetweet is simple to explain – but less simple to construct. “Poetweet” is a free verse poem constructed with *exactly* 140 characters. That number *includes* punctuation and line breaks. (Hence the “tweet” portion of the name. “Tweets” in “Twitter” can be no longer than 140 characters.)
I was introduced to Poetweet by thotpurge. Please visit the author – Rajani has a wonderful perspective and has given us permission to share this poetweet:
See us,
tiny pieces
in a giant kaleidoscope,
turning,
tumbling,
forming exquisite patterns
of incoherent magnificence.
Until a mirror breaks.
While (technically) a “poetweet” can be less than 140 characters long, for this challenge try to write your poem as close to 140 characters as possible – without going over the limit. You’ll need to weigh every word – every bit of punctuation – every line break – very carefully.
For your inspiration I’m adding a great old cabinet card – of a handsome gentleman at his writing table! (I like to be contrary that way.) However – feel free to write on any subject you prefer.
Feel free to write a shadorma and/or poetweet. The choice is yours! When you have written your poem(s), please TAG them BJ’s Shadorma & Beyond and MindLoveMisery’s Menagerie. Then add your link to the Mister Linky widget below.
Good luck!
Jen
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Now THAT is original and a challenge but a great exercise to practice since tweets are so limited in space.
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Reblogged this on THOTPURGE and commented:
Jen, thank you for introducing my poetweet to your readers.
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Thank YOU for allowing us to share this form and to share your poetry! 🙂
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Very original and very au courant! I’ve never tweeted in my life … so this is also a real challenge … I’m uses to counting beats, I’m used to counting syllables but I’ve never counted characters!
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I tweet every once in a great while — and each time have to cut words and punctuation and compress that online gabbiness! Nrml twts luk lk ths bc I tlk 2mch! 😉
Yes. A huge challenge 🙂
But Thotpurge makes it look so easy.
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Well I did a write .. but I’ll have to do another .. that just doesn’t look like a poem to me 😉
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But it was a great experiment and that is half the fun, right???
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Fun – exactly 140 plus a Shadorma
https://juleslongerstrandsofgems.wordpress.com/2015/02/28/poetry-is-attempting-to-communicate-2-28/
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If I counted right… lovely challenge, I’ve never tweeted.
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Glad you enjoyed!
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[…] Which I’ve put together in a Poetweet an interesting form of poetry introduced to our Jen (The J of BJ) by thotpurge for this week’s Mindlovemisery’s BJ and Shadorma and Beyond! […]
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I’m not entirely sure how to ping back but I put a link on the link page 🙂 Loved this challenge. 140 characters! It’s hard but definitely worth a try!
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[…] selfie at the bar is NOT what i have chosen- but it is mine and i will possess it. ◊ Linked to BJ’s Shadorma & Beyond: Poetweet. The Poetweet was created by Thotpurge. It is a poem created in exactly 140 characters – […]
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[…] for two Mind Love Misery prompts. The first prompt is for a Poetweet and asks us to construct a free verse poem with exactly 140 characters (that includes line breaks, […]
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Thanks for the prompt! Here are my Shadormas:
https://grieflessons.wordpress.com/2015/03/02/five-shadormas/ E
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So glad to see you here! Off to read your shadormas now 🙂
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